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The diagram shows that how bees produced honey

The diagram shows that how bees produced honey 3AMnw

overall, after observing the given process, it is clear that it is natural process. There are seven main steps involved in this process. The first step is built hives by bees and end up with the prepared honey. it is a highlighter in this chat, firstly hives are built by distinct bees. Then, bees leave their hives and go to find flowers. After that, nector are collected by bees. in the fourth step, collected nectar is kept into the distinct cells which are constructed by bees. In the fifth step, all group of honeybees fan their wings and coll down the cells. Furthermore, in the sixth stage, start water evaporation, all water are evaporated by their cells. At the seventh step, prepared honey extract by the cell and after that field into the distinct type of container then honey is ready to use different purposes.

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