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The map show the changes in the university sports centre

The map show the changes in the university sports centre BlY2V
The rendered map depicts the various changes which are planned to be done in the future. Overall, it is a apparent that future plants will add more activities for visitors at the expense of outdoor courts. To begin with present, reception area is at the entrance of the the centre, while outdoor courts are available on the right and left side of the area. There is 25 metre pool on the centre of the area. Beside that, sitting is available on the right side of the pool and changing room is on the left side. Gym is on the the North side of the pool. Furthermore, Future plans indicate that more facilities are needed. Changing rooms are at the corner of the centre, where as Leisure pool is introduced on the west side of the area. Gym area is incremented which is on the front wall of the sports centre. Sports shop and Cafe are also available at the entrance. Cool and sitting remained unchanged but sports hall all is going to built beside the sitting. Two dance studios are there opposite of the sports hall.
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are planned
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Overall
, it is
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apparent that future plants will
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add
more activities for visitors at the expense of outdoor courts.

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is at the entrance of
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centre
, while outdoor courts are available on the right and
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side of the
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. There is 25
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pool on the
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of the
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. Beside that, sitting is available on the right side of the pool and changing room is on the
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side. Gym is on
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Furthermore
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are needed
. Changing rooms are at the corner of the
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,
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Leisure pool
is introduced
on the west side of the
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area
. Gym
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area
is incremented
which is on the front wall of the
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sports
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centre
.
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hall all is going to
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