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Weekends are my free time, and I usually spend it reading books and swimming

Weekends are my free time, and I usually spend it reading books and swimming QK7rK
In your free time, you can engage in a variety of activities. Weekends are my free time, and I usually spend it reading books and swimming. I prefer to read books in a silent room because it makes me feel more at ease. The book gives me a lot of knowledge and thinking. One of the books I read was by Bill Gates, an American billionaire. His books give me a great inspiration in life. In addition, I spend less time swimming with my family because swimming improves my health and makes me healthier. In short, weekends are the best time to unwind after a long week of school.
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knowledge and thinking. One of the
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I read was by Bill Gates, an American billionaire. His
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give me a great inspiration in life.
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swimming with my family
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to unwind after a long week of school.

IELTS academic Weekends are my free time, and I usually spend it reading books and swimming

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
109 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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