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getting lost in Ho Chi Minh City was the one that scares me the most

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There were many lost times in my life, but getting lost in Ho Chi Minh City was the one that scares me the most. I enrolled in Van Lang University, which has outstanding and gorgeous facilities that draw a large number of students. After those two days, I had to drive myself to the city to apply for the school. However, when I arrived in the city, I became frightened. In the city, there are many roads and even small alleys. I started to feel scared because I kept running into roads I didn't know. Even though I was in a miserable situation of losing my way, I continued to follow my thoughts. It rained after a while of driving, so I had to find a place to avoid the rain, which turned out to be a banana bush with a nasty smell. Luckily, an uncle came running over and helped me out of the way. In summary, it was the fear of being lost that terrified me the most, and I will never forget that moment.

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many
 lost times in my life, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 getting lost in Ho Chi Minh City was the one that scares me the most. I enrolled in Van Lang University, which has outstanding and gorgeous facilities that draw Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use "many" or "numerous"manynumerous
a large number of
 students. After those two days, I had to drive myself to the city to You can apply for a job or welfare, but you apply to a school. Revise: "apply to the school".apply to the school
apply for the school
. However
, when I arrived in the city, I became frightened. In the city, there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 roads and even This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 alleys. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiated
started
 to feel scared This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retained
kept
 running into roads I didn't know. Even though
 I was in a miserable situation of losing my way, I continued to follow my thoughts. It rained after a while of driving, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I had to find a place to avoid the rain, which turned out to be a banana bush with a nasty smell. Luckily, an uncle came running over and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 me out of the way. In summary, it was the fear of being lost
 that terrified me the most, and I will never forget that moment. 