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the diagrams illustrate how to make a driving license in the US

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the diagrams illustrate how to make a driving license in the US it is clear that there are 7 steps in the process of producing a driving license in the US starting at going to the driving license center and ending at getting the driving license. The process begins when going to the driving license center then we need to fill in the information on the form to register. After that, take an eyesight test if eyesight is good it will pass and pay a fee to continue however if eyesight is not qualified it will fall, and cannot participate in the license. After passing the eyesight test and paying the fee the process continues with having the written exam if failing the written exam it will retake the exam until passing the written test. Next, doing the road exam to practice and if failing the road exam, paying a fee and retake the written exam. And if passing the road exam, getting the driving license.
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in the US starting at going to the
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center and ending at getting the
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license.

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center then we need to fill in the information on the form to register. After that, take an
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is not qualified it will fall, and cannot participate in the license.

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and paying the fee the process continues with having the
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exam if failing the
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exam it will retake the exam until passing the
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IELTS academic the diagrams illustrate how to make a driving license in the US

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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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