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Is it possible to live without technology?

Is it possible to live without technology? dpVeE
Is it possible to live without technology? Many things are done with technology and have an important part in human life.   People need technology in different ways, for example, communicating, searching, etc. Technology can be used for useful tasks, for example, doing administrative and necessary work with technology, or with the coronavirus of university schools.   Closed.   You can participate in classes using the Internet and technology. Or other work, download movies, music and games, etc. On the other hand, excessive use of technology causes a lot of addiction to it and makes people lazy.   There is a loss of visions and visits between friends and family. Of course, people use a small amount of technology and are not able to use the rest, which is a major problem.   In my opinion, more technology should be used for essential tasks because it causes harm to human life
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IELTS academic Is it possible to live without technology?

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2 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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