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How can education be made easier for students?

How can education be made easier for students? ArLKM
How can education be made easier for students? Do these things eliminate the problems? Today there are many problems in the education system in different countries, such as Iran, which we are talking about. The education system in Iran is such that 6 years in primary school, 3 years in middle school and 3 years in high school, and after these years this person  He goes to university, That is a problem. One of the most problem is the lessons they teach students that have no effect on their future lives. Another problem is the use of non-specialist teachers in other subjects.   Another problem is using managers who do not have the ability to manage. There are ways to solve these problems that we must follow in order. Reduce this 12-year gap between schools and universities, use specialized instructors for lessons, eliminate unnecessary lessons, and instead teach them ways and means to ring and  Useful and experienced. As a result, we must do at least a few of these things in order for our education system to thrive
How can
education
be made
easier for students?

Do these things eliminate the problems?

Today
there are
many
problems
in the
education
system in
different
countries, such as Iran, which we are talking about. The
education
system in Iran is such that 6 years in primary
school
, 3 years in middle
school
and 3 years in high
school
, and after these years this person
 
He goes to university,
That is
a problem.

One of the most
problem
is the lessons they teach students that have no effect on their future
lives
.

Another
problem
is the
use
of non-specialist teachers in other subjects.
 
Another
problem
is using managers who do not have the ability to manage.

There are ways to solve these
problems
that we
must
follow in order.

Reduce
this
12-year
gap between
schools
and universities,
use
specialized instructors for lessons, eliminate unnecessary lessons, and
instead
teach them ways and means to ring and
 
Useful and experienced.

As a result
, we
must
do at least a few of these things in order for our
education
system to thrive
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