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water usage in Australia and its purposes of use in residential houses

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The pie chart illustrates the proportion of water usage in Australia and the bar chart breaks it down by their residential purposes. Overall, the major consumer of water was the residential houses and its main purpose used was for the bathrooms. Out of the six sectors provided, houses consumed more than half of the overall water used in Australia at 57%. Following this, the proportion of water used by residential apartments, businesses and industries did not differ by much, at 13%, 11% and 10% respectively. Government buildings used only 6% of the overall water consumption and the others amounted to only 3%. From the bar chart, it can be seen that the houses used water mostly for the bathrooms (28%) and the gardens (27%). Meanwhile, washing clothes took up 20% and the toilets 15% of the household water used. Only 10% of water was used by the kitchens, thereby becoming the residential purpose that used the least water.
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usage in Australia and the bar chart breaks it down by their
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residential
purposes.
Overall
, the major consumer of
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was the
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residential
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houses
and its main purpose
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was for the bathrooms.

Out of the six sectors provided,
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consumed more than half of the
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in Australia at 57%. Following this, the proportion of
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by
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apartments, businesses and industries did not differ by much, at 13%, 11% and 10%
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Government
buildings
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6% of the
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consumption and the others amounted to
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3%.

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mostly
for the bathrooms (28%) and the gardens (27%). Meanwhile, washing clothes took up 20% and the toilets 15% of the household
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was
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by the kitchens, thereby becoming the
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purpose that
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the least
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IELTS academic water usage in Australia and its purposes of use in residential houses

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6.5
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