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the given graph shows the number of students studying languages at one university in uk

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The graph shows the amount of students studied six different languages at one of the universities in the United Kingdom in a period of twenty five years. The graph covers information about learning French, Spanish, German, Chinese, Polish and Arabic languages from 1990 to 2015. The main fact is that the number of students studied Spanish, Chinese and Polish languages were always growing from 40 to approximately 340 students. The number of students studied Spanish and Chinese rapidly grew during 25 years while students studied Polish steadily were growing in 15 years with maximums of students 340 (Spanish), 210 (Chinese) and 130 (Polish). Others (French, German, Arabic) were unstable during 25 years despite some attempts of rising the number of students. The number of students studied French reached a peak in 1995 with 400 students and after that were steadily dropping next 20 years to 205 students. After 25 years, the number of students studyied Arabic came back to the same number of 50 students, regardless dropping to the bottom and reaching the maximum, while the number of students studied German were fluctuating these 25 years.
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