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The table and pie chart demonstrate the value and sources of fish imported to the USA

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The table illustrates the breakdown of final amount of money spent on fish importation to the USA throughout a three- year period from 1998to 2000, with the source of fish that is shown in the pie chart. To begin, it is true that in 2000 was spent the highest rate of expenses a hefty 11 million, whereas in 1998 the figure was the lowest, which is almost a half of previous results. (6millions) When the proportion in 1999 accounted to 8. 5 millions. In terms of fish sources, the most significant part of fish in 1998 was imported from Canada, a grand 60%, on the contrary, the next two years the incentives of Canada was only a third in the fish market. The trend of China amounted to a mere 13% in the first year, then had experienced a slight surge by 2000, at 30%. More fish was transported from other countries than from China within a period, but never increased a half. Overall, the data indicates than the most significant expenditures the USA government spent in 2000 and more fish was bought from other countries.
The table illustrates the breakdown of final amount of money spent on fish importation to the USA throughout a three- year period from 1998to 2000, with the source of fish that
is shown
in the pie chart. To
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin
, it is true that in 2000
was spent
the highest rate of expenses a hefty 11 million, whereas in 1998 the figure was the lowest, which is almost a half of previous results. (6millions) When the proportion in 1999 accounted to 8. 5 millions. In terms of fish sources, the most significant part of fish in 1998
was imported
from Canada, a grand 60%,
on the contrary
, the
next
two years the incentives of Canada was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
a third in the fish market. The trend of China amounted to a mere 13% in the
first
year, then had experienced a slight surge by 2000, at 30%. More fish
was transported
from other countries than from China within a period,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
never increased a half.
Overall
, the data indicates than the most significant expenditures the USA
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
spent in 2000 and more fish was
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
bought
from other countries.
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