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Goods Transportation Mode in the UK

Goods Transportation Mode in the UK RRE5Y
The quantities of goods transported in the UK from the year of 1974 to 2002 is presented in the graph. Besides, there are four different types of transportation is utilized over the years. Firstly, in 1974, around 70 million tons of goods were transported by road, which eventually increased and almost reached the 100 million tones mark. Secondly, from around 39 million tones to approximately 65 million tons of goods were transported via water during the given timeframe. Thirdly, railroads were also used to transport goods and the range was from 40 million tons to 41 million tones. Last but not the least, in 1974, around 5 percent of goods were transported via pipeline which increased to 21 percent in 2002. In conclusion, the highest amount of goods was transported to the UK by utilizing roads from 1974 to 2002, which reached approximately 100 million tons. The second most way of transportation was waterways. On the other hand, the lowest goods were transported via pipeline.
The quantities of
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goods
transported in the UK from the year of 1974 to 2002
is presented
in the graph.
Besides
, there are four
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different
types of transportation
is utilized
over the years.

Firstly
, in 1974, around 70
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million
tons of
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goods
were transported
by road, which
eventually
increased and almost reached the 100
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million
tones mark.
Secondly
, from around 39
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million
tones to approximately 65
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million
tons of
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goods
were transported
via water during the
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given
timeframe.
Thirdly
, railroads were
also
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used
to transport
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goods
and the range was from 40
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million
tons to 41
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million
tones. Last
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but
not the least, in 1974, around 5 percent of
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goods
were transported
via pipeline which increased to 21 percent in 2002.

In conclusion
, the highest amount of
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goods
was transported
to the UK by utilizing roads from 1974 to 2002, which reached approximately 100
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million
tons. The second most way of transportation was waterways.
On the other hand
, the lowest
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goods
were transported
via pipeline.
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IELTS academic Goods Transportation Mode in the UK

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3 paragraphs
165 words
6.5
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