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Waste produced by three companies

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Line graph depicts waste accumulated by three companies in time period of 15 years. It is clear that that waste produced is in tones and year is given from 2005 to 2015, and they displayed the each companies line in different shades accordance with there waste production. The Company A has blue color, second Company B has green color and the last Company C has orange color. In the year 2000 Company A is the mass producer of waste at 12 tones, it gradually decrease in constant decline position up to 2015, at 8 tones. By contrast, Company B is at 8 tones in 2000, then increase significantly to 10 tones in 2005, the primitive measures were taken by the company and graph fall down to 3 tones in 2015. And for the company C is the least producer of waste at the starting of the year 2000 with 4 tones of production, the it starts escalating to 6 tones in 2005. For the year 2010 both the company have same amount of waste production with 7 tones, and there production rocket to 10 tones in 2015.
Line graph depicts
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waste
accumulated by three
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companies
in time period of 15 years.

It is
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clear
that that
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waste
produced is in
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tones
and
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year
is
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given
from 2005 to 2015, and they displayed
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the each
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companies
line in
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different
shades accordance with there
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waste
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production
. The
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Company
A has blue color, second
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Company
B has green color and the last
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C has orange color.

In the
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year
2000
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Company
A is the mass producer of
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waste
at 12
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tones
, it
gradually
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decrease
in constant decline position up to 2015, at 8
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tones
. By contrast,
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Company
B is at 8
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tones
in 2000, then increase
significantly
to 10
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tones
in 2005, the primitive measures
were taken
by the
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company
and graph fall down to 3
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tones
in 2015.

And for the
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C is the least producer of
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waste
at the starting of the
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year
2000 with 4
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tones
of
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production
,
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the it
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escalating to 6
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tones
in 2005. For the
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year
2010 both the
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company
have same
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of
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waste
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with 7
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tones
, and there
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production
rocket to 10
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in 2015.
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IELTS academic Waste produced by three companies

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4 paragraphs
187 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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