Search
Tools
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

The chart gives information about car ownership

The chart gives information about car ownership wMgbY

The given line graph illustrates how car ownership of the UK over the period of 30 years, starting from 1975. In general, the proportion of people who use two or three car rose while the figure for humans in the UK had 1 car was most prevelant throughout the period shown, In 1975, the number who had 1 car and no car was highest, with below 45%. But, the figure for UK populations had 3 or 2 cars were lowest, just under 10%. After 10 years later, at 39% of people who had 1 car, and humans who had no car was increased remarkably, with about 25%. The last one, who had 3 or 2 cars were grow minimally, approximately 15Over the next 20 years, the percentage of those with one car gradually rose back up to 45% whereas the percentage of those with no car continued to decline to about 22%. On the other hand, the proportion of people having 2 and 3 cars continued to rise over the following 20 years to 19% and 9% respectively

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 line graph illustrates how You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 ownership of the UK over the period of 30 years, starting from 1975. In general
, the proportion of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 two or three Possible agreement error. The noun 'car' seems to be countable, so consider using: "cars".cars
car
 rose while the figure for humans in the UK had 1 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 was most Possible spelling mistake found.preventprevalent
prevelant
 throughout the period shown, In 1975, the number You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 had 1 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 and no You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 was highest, with below 45%. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
, the figure for UK populations had 3 or 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 were lowest, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 under 10%. After 10 years later, at 39% of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 had 1 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
, and humans You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 had no You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
was increased
remarkably
, with about 25%. The last one, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwhich
who
 had 3 or 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 were Consider using a past participle here: "grown".grown
grow
minimally
, approximately 15Over the next
 20 years, the percentage of those with one You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
gradually
 rose back up to 45% whereas the percentage of those with no You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 continued to decline to about 22%. On the other hand
, the proportion of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 having 2 and 3 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
cars
 continued to rise over the following 20 years to 19% and 9% Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphrespectively.respectively!respectively?respectively:respectively,respectively;
respectively