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“La vie est belle” is an artificial campsite where I and my classmates stayed on a camping holiday last month.

“La vie est belle” is an artificial campsite where I and my classmates stayed on a camping holiday last month. jDxnp
“La vie est belle” is an artificial campsite where I and my classmates stayed on a camping holiday last month. There is a tranquil place where students can get close to nature and take part in camping activites. " La vie est belle" is located in the North of THG city. There is a spacious camground with different flat ereas for students and teachers put up tents. This corner can choose to camp near a river or a medium-sized mountain is surrounded by beautiful landsapes. The only downside is that the road is a bit rough and steep for school' cars to go. There are a lot of basic but essential facilities such as medium-sized bathroom, an open-air cooking area and some pinic tables. All facilities are well maintainted. Moreover, there is a large playground to oganzise teambuilding games or other outdoor activies. A small clinic which is available in case any campers need medical treatments. I highly recommed others campers should go to "La vie" campsite that is a ideal place to take a rest at the weekend. Most classmates can escape from study stress and explore the nature. Furthermore, strengthen the friendship are capable of staying together and share camping experience.
“La vie est belle” is an artificial campsite where I and my classmates stayed on a camping holiday last month. There is a tranquil place where students can
get
close to nature and
take part
in camping
activites
.

"
La vie est belle
"
is located
in the North of
THG
city. There is a spacious
camground
with
different
flat
ereas
for students and teachers put up tents. This corner can choose to camp near a river or a medium-sized mountain
is surrounded
by
beautiful
landsapes
. The
only
downside is that the road is a bit rough and steep for school' cars to go.

There are
a lot of
basic
but
essential facilities such as medium-sized bathroom, an open-air cooking area and
some
pinic
tables. All facilities are well
maintainted
.
Moreover
, there is a large playground to
oganzise
teambuilding
games or other outdoor
activies
. A
small
clinic which is available in case any campers need medical treatments.

I
highly
recommed
others campers should go to
"
La vie
"
campsite
that is
a
ideal place to take a rest
at the weekend
. Most classmates can escape from study
stress
and explore the nature.
Furthermore
, strengthen the friendship are capable of staying together and share camping experience.
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