Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The charts illustrate different weight groups between English men and women from 1993 to 2002.

The charts illustrate different weight groups between English men and women from 1993 to 2002. QKP9L
The charts illustrate different weight groups between English men and women from 1993 to 2002. In 1993, there were more healthy men than women, 50% compared to 40%. After 9 years, the figures of both genders dropped remarkably to 39% and 31%. Meanwhile, the number of women who were overweight was higher than men in 1993. In the next 9 years, both of them witnessed a slight rise. Overweight men accounted for 48 % of the weight group while overweight women accounted for 50%. Between 1993 and 2002, the proportion of obese men and women had the same uptrend. In 1993, obese men and women accounted for 10% of the weight group and the rate of both sexes rose to approximately 18% after 9 years. There were no men and women in dangerously obese group in 1993 and the figure remained the same in 2002. Overall, in a period of 9 years, healthy weight population had a downtrend while the proportion of obese people increased signigicantly.
The charts illustrate
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weight
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
groups
between English
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
men
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
from 1993 to 2002.

In 1993, there were more healthy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
men
than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
, 50% compared to 40%. After 9 years, the figures of both genders dropped
remarkably
to 39% and 31%. Meanwhile, the number of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
who were overweight was higher than
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
men
in 1993. In the
next
9 years, both of them witnessed a slight rise. Overweight
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
men
accounted for 48 % of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weight
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
while overweight
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
accounted for 50%.

Between 1993 and 2002, the proportion of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
obese
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
men
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
had the same uptrend. In 1993,
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
obese
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
men
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
accounted for 10% of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weight
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
and the rate of both sexes rose to approximately 18% after 9 years. There were no
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
men
and
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
women
in
dangerously
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
obese
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
group
in 1993 and the figure remained the same in 2002.

Overall
, in a period of 9 years, healthy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
weight
population had a downtrend while the proportion of
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
obese
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
increased
Possible spelling mistake found.
signigicantly
.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The charts illustrate different weight groups between English men and women from 1993 to 2002.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
166 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The charts illustrate different weight groups between English men and women from 1993 to 2002.