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The diagram illustrates how Underground Station Passengers Numbers in London changes over a period from 6 a. m. to 22. 00 p. m. At 6 a. m. they stand at 100 people and an hour later the number of passengers doubles. This follows by another increase, although much steeper at 8 a. m, when passengers almost 200 people higher than at 7 a. m. However, this upward trend suddenly breaks and passengers plummet dramatically over the next two hours to reach a little about 170 people at 10 a. m. At lunchtime passengers rise back to 9 a. m. levels, but they dramatically drops again at 16 p. m. At 18 p. m. there a high increase about 350 people, after which the amount of passengers drops again. In the evening the figure levels off and remains relatively static. Overall, Underground Station Passengers in London relatively unchanged at the end of day despite violent fluctuations throughout the day. Besides, they were at their highest at 8 a. m. and 18 p. m. while the weakest passengers could be observed at 6 a. m. and 16 p. m.

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end
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passengers
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