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Species of Birds Observed in Woodchuck County by Season

Species of Birds Observed in Woodchuck County by Season Pkm1J

The table indicates a partial list of types of birds that can be seen in the sky of Woodchuck County in two different season, summer and winter. As shown from this, we can clearly see that migration definitely occurs in this city, although there are some species that are known to stay throughout the year. Even though the majority of species studied are migratory, their preferred season is undoubtedly summer, for almost all (seven out of eight) is observed in this time of the year. The only exception is juncos, which immigrated in this area during winter. The other migratory types, which are bluebirds, mockingbirds, orioles and vireos just to name a few, leave there for a warmer continent before the cold season starts. However, not all species leave this city in a specified time of the year. Taking cardinals for example, they can be seen in Woodchuck County in all seasons. Other non-migratory birds being crows and woodpeckers, like cardinals, are known to stay here in both summer and winter, without traveling to other parts of the world.

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 in Woodchuck County in all You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsummerfallperiodwintertime
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. Other non-migratory birds being crows and woodpeckers, like cardinals, are known
 to stay here in both summer and winter, without traveling to other parts of the world. 