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want to say work hard to be successful

want to say work hard to be successful OwRld

At the beginning my grandmother used to bake cakes, and used to give it to the poor people in the neighbourhood, she was very friendly with them. my grandmother’s cake was very popular in the neighbourhood because it was delicious. some day my grandfather decided to open a small business that sells my grandmother’s cakes, and it became successful, then the project become popular to the point where they can open a factory. It is different from other cake business because the cakes taste different and delicious. When my grandfather passed away, I was in charge of the factory. My sisters help me in the factory and we work hard together to make it successful. At the end, I want to say work hard to be successful

At the beginning my grandmother This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to bake You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloaf
cakes
, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to give it to the poor This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in the Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbourhood' is British English.neighborhood
neighbourhood
, she was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 friendly with them. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMy
my
 grandmother’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloaf
cake
 was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 popular in the Possible spelling mistake. 'neighbourhood' is British English.neighborhood
neighbourhood
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it was delicious. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSome
some
 day my grandfather decided to open a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 business that sells my grandmother’s You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloaf
cakes
, and it became successful, then the project become popular to the point where they can open a factory. It is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 from other You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloaf
cake
 business This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloaf
cakes
 taste This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 and delicious. When my grandfather passed away, I was in charge of the factory. My sisters This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me in the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).factory, and
factory and
 we work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 together to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 it successful. At the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
, I want to say work This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to be Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphsuccessful.successful!successful?successful:successful,successful;
successful