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trees and being guilty for something

trees and being guilty for something gqWAO
I don't know and there is no way for me to knowing that, but one thing is for sure: Fast every tree has green leaves. And did you ever notice that the wood actually isn't brown but gray? I'm doing as if I thought about a topic for this text, but I didn't. I once impressed a girl while climbing a tree, like monkeys do. I plucked an apple for her. Sometimes I think why did he like me, there apparently weren't any reason for that. But I know I did a lot of strange things without noticing it. For the same reason he lost interest. Don't you see it? Trees are guilty! Let's burn them all, the guy from Fahrenheit 451 would like it. <3
I don't know and there is no way for me to knowing that,
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one thing is for sure:
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Fast
every tree has green
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leaves
. And did you ever notice that the wood actually isn't brown
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gray?

I'm doing as if I
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thought
about a topic for this text,
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I didn't. I once impressed a girl while climbing a tree, like monkeys do.
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I
plucked an apple for her.

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Sometimes
I
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think
why did he like me, there
apparently
weren't any reason for that.
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But
I know I did
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a lot of
strange things without noticing it. For the same reason he lost interest.

Don't you
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see
it? Trees are guilty!
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Let
's burn them all, the guy from Fahrenheit 451 would like it.

<3
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IELTS academic trees and being guilty for something

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
125 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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