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The table shows the average time send money spent at different types of restaurants.

The table shows the average time send money spent at different types of restaurants. 9Bwjr
The tabulated data clearly differentiates the amount of time and finances consumed by customers in three distinct kinds of restaurants. At the outset, it is evident that the expenses and time utilised by the people in dinning restaurant was undoubtedly much higher and more time consuming as compared to the café and fast food chains. To begin with, there is also a cost difference between lunch and dineout in all of three restaurant types. As sit down eateries is more expensive with $17: 00 at dinner in comparison to a mid day meal that cost only $10 per person. On the other hand, it'd been observed that customers don't $ 9. 50 and $ 7: 00 respectfully. Whereas at quick service chains, an average of $5: 00 and $4. 50 is usually spent for night and day meal. The average time consumed by food zealous also shared variations in these particular types of restaurants. There was duration of 45 minutes for lunch and an hour for night meal in dining restaurants. Meanwhile, it required only half an hour for lunch and 45 minutes to finish dinner at cafeteria. Whereas, fast food chains not only provided services in lesser time period of 20 minutes for both day and night scheduled meals but are far more reasonable and cheaper as compared to the others.
The tabulated data
clearly
differentiates the amount of
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time
and finances consumed by customers in three distinct kinds of restaurants.

At the outset, it is evident that the expenses and
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time
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utilised
by the
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people
in dinning
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restaurant
was
undoubtedly
much higher and more
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time consuming
as compared to the café and
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fast
food chains.

To
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begin
with, there is
also
a cost difference between lunch and
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dineout
in
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all of three
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restaurant
types. As sit down eateries is more expensive with $17: 00 at dinner
in comparison
to a
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mid day
meal that cost
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only
$10 per person.
On the other hand
, it'd
been observed
that customers don't
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$ 9
. 50 and
The currency mark is usually written without any whitespace: "$7".
$ 7
: 00
respectfully
. Whereas at quick service chains, an average of $5: 00 and $4. 50 is
usually
spent for night and day meal.

The average
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time
consumed by food zealous
also
shared variations in these particular types of
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restaurants
. There was duration of 45 minutes for lunch and an hour for night meal in dining
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restaurants
. Meanwhile, it required
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
half an hour for lunch and 45 minutes to finish dinner at cafeteria. Whereas,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
fast
food chains not
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only
provided services in lesser
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time
period of 20 minutes for both day and night scheduled meals
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but
are far more reasonable and cheaper
Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.
as
compared to the others.
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