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Wages from 25 to 60 based on degree types.

Wages from 25 to 60 based on degree types. mXgWO
In this graph, we can see that it provides the weekly earnings of full-time graduate employees by the type of degree and the age varies from 25 to 60. Obviously there is only a trend can be seen on the graph, although there are some differences at the age groups that close to retirement. All of the three types of degree saw an increasing trend from 21 to 45. After that period, the wages of the groups started to rise at the slower rate. The closer the age to the retiirement, the lower the wages.
In this graph, we can
see
that it provides the weekly earnings of full-time graduate employees by the type of degree and the age varies from 25 to 60.
Obviously
there is
only
a trend can be
seen
on the graph, although there are
some
differences at the age groups that close to retirement.
All of the
three types of degree
saw
an increasing trend from 21 to 45. After that period, the wages of the groups
started
to rise at the slower rate. The closer the age to the
retiirement
, the lower the wages.
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IELTS academic Wages from 25 to 60 based on degree types.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
95 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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