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The bar graph shows the Percentage about usage of internet in UK.

The bar graph shows the Percentage about usage of internet in UK. 2KEAA
The information related to the cyperspace which use by the individual is depicted by bar graph. The data is calibrated into percentage. Overall, the most striking feature is that 25 age group use excessive internet, whereas the least utilize through 65 age groups. At the first glance, it is clear, 80% network is used by 25age group people in 2021. However, it uses around 50% through the 33age groups. 65+ utilize less data which is accounted at around 15%.
The information related to the
cyperspace
which
use
by the individual
is depicted
by bar graph. The data
is calibrated
into percentage.
Overall
, the most striking feature is that 25
age
group
use
excessive internet, whereas the least utilize through 65
age
groups
. At the
first
glance, it is
clear
, 80% network is
used
by
25age
group
people
in 2021.
However
, it
uses
around 50% through the
33age
groups
. 65+ utilize
less
data which
is accounted
at around 15%.
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