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The pictures below show the plan of Walton Museum in 2008 and the plan in 2012, after it was redeveloped.

The pictures below show the plan of Walton Museum in 2008 and the plan in 2012, after it was redeveloped. b2RQl

The given diagrams depict information about the design of Walton Museum in 2008 and the plan in 2012, after it was redesigned. Overall, it is explicit that the Walton Museum was more developed in 2012 as compared to in 2008 because ample of facilities had installed in the Walton Museum in 2012. In 2008, the Walton Museum start with the small entrance and thrre was reception in front of entry. In 2012, the Separate entrance hall had decided to build and cloak room had planned to added with receptionist area. Cloak room was in the south- east in 2008. It had decided to convert in the children play region. Restaurant was decided to install above the reception and cloak room. Moving further, social exhibition place had decided to be at same location as in 2008. Shop was also remain at same place in the southern side of Walton Museum. Lift had planned to install in the place of stairs. Reading had also planned to be at same location as in 2008. Self service cafe and exhibition room had decided to construct in the upper side of reading room. There was also a terrace in the upper side of entry room in 2012.

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given
 diagrams depict information about the design of Walton You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
Museum
 in 2008 and the plan in 2012, after it was redesigned
.

Overall
, it is explicit that the Walton You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
Museum
 was more developed in 2012 as compared to in 2008 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 ample of facilities had installed in the Walton You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
Museum
 in 2012.

In 2008, the Walton You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
Museum
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start
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small
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thrre
 was reception in front of entry. In 2012, the Separate entrance hall had You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpronouncedsuredistinctdeterminedsettledresolved
decided
 to build and cloak You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 had planned to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 with receptionist area. Cloak You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 was in the south- east in 2008. It had You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpronouncedsuredistinctdeterminedsettledresolved
decided
 to convert in the children play region. Restaurant was You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpronouncedsuredistinctdeterminedsettledresolved
decided
 to install above the reception and cloak room.

Moving further
, social exhibition place had You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpronouncedsuredistinctdeterminedsettledresolved
decided
 to be at same location as in 2008. Shop was also
Consider using a past participle here: "remained".remained
remain
 at same place in the southern side of Walton You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbuildingfoundationsalonlibrarygalleryinstitution
Museum
. Lift had planned to install in the place of stairs. Reading had also
 planned to be at same location as in 2008. This word is normally spelled with hyphen.Self-service
Self service
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 and exhibition You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 had You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpronouncedsuredistinctdeterminedsettledresolved
decided
 to construct in the upper side of reading You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
. There was also
 a terrace in the upper side of entry You use this word too often, consider replacing it withplacearea
room
 in 2012. 