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The line graph illustrates the regional household recycling rates in three countries: UK, Frances, Germany from 2005 to 2015.

The line graph illustrates the regional household recycling rates in three countries: UK, Frances, Germany from 2005 to 2015. kxmre
The line graph illustrates the regional household recycling rates in three countries: UK, Frances, Germany from 2005 to 2015. Overall, the percentage of regional household recycling in the UK and France increased while the percentage of regional household recycling in Germany decreased. At first, the percentage of regional household recycling in France was the largest. However, at the end of the period, the UK became the biggest. Between 2005 and 2009, the regional household recycling rates grow slowly in the UK and France, the percentage of regional household recycling rose gradually. In Germany, the percentages of regional household recycling climbed sharply. Over the following two years, between 2011 and 2015 in the UK regional household recycling decreased sharply, and Germany climbed rapidly, too. By contrast, France wave in this period
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rates in three countries: UK, Frances, Germany from 2005 to 2015.
Overall
, the
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percentage
of
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household
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recycling
in the UK and France increased while the
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percentage
of
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regional
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household
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in Germany decreased. At
first
, the
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percentage
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regional
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household
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in France was the largest.
However
, at the
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of the period, the UK became the biggest. Between 2005 and 2009, the
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regional
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rates grow
slowly
in the UK and France, the
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of
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rose
gradually
. In Germany, the
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climbed
sharply
. Over the following two years, between 2011 and 2015 in the UK
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decreased
sharply
, and Germany climbed
rapidly
, too. By contrast, France
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in this
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the regional household recycling rates in three countries: UK, Frances, Germany from 2005 to 2015.

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129 words
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