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Vistors before rennovation and after rennovation

Vistors before rennovation and after rennovation DoQLW

The two pie charts illustrate that number of people who are visited to Asdown Museum year before refurbishmnet and after the completion of refubishment. Surveys that are conducted on the same two time periods how they were satisfied. Overall, during the year prior refurbishment and after almost 166000 vistitore steped in the art centre whereas there is no significant change in the satisfied people as well not responed tourists. Firstly there is huge downfall in the dissatisfied ones eventhough there is a raise in after rennovation. There is a equal percentage in no reply because of their own priorities. In raise of disatifaction somwhere results variations takes place whenever new placemnets are doesn't attract them. In order that, after completion of new works very dissatisfied public reviews fall down by half. Any how very satisfied doubed almost if thery are happy to see again.

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