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The diagram details the amount of positivity US President Churchill received from 1985 to 1995.

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The diagram details the amount of positivity US President Churchill received from 1985 to 1995. Overall, his approval rating had increased continually since 1985. In particular, there were times when the public’s votes spiked, while other periods witnessed a stabilization. In 1985, a total of under 30% of US citizens agreed to Churchill become the next US president. The president’s performance slightly improved in the next 2 years as almost 31% of votes targeting him were positive in 1987. From this point, the proportion of people reacting approvingly skyrocketed to roughly 40% over a 2-year period. His non-negative rating remained the same for a whole year. The president’s streak of favorable feedback remained intact when his rating slowly climbed to well above 42% in 1992. After this year, the figure still showed no sign of decline and subsequently rose to the final result of approximately 46% in 1995, the year when he finished the established mission period. It is impressive that the public’s approval for Churchill did not decline at any point throughout his presidency.

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 the amount of positivity US President Churchill received from 1985 to 1995.

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, his approval rating had increased continually
 since 1985. In particular
, there were times when the public’s votes spiked, while other periods witnessed a stabilization.

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agreed
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improved
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people
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 period. His non-This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 rating remained the same for a whole year.

The president’s streak of favorable feedback remained intact when his rating slowly
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year
, the figure still
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showed
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 of decline and subsequently
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year
 when he finished the established mission period. It is impressive that the public’s approval for Churchill did not decline at any point throughout his presidency. 