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The line graph compares the number of foreign visitors to types of different places in European country from 1987 to 2007.

The line graph compares the number of foreign visitors to types of different places in European country from 1987 to 2007. bryLX

The line graph illustrate the quantity of foreign visitors to the coast, the mountains and the lakes in a European country during 20 years starting from 1987. Overall, the general trend for the number of foreigners who visited the coast, the mountains and the lakes was upward over the period shown. In 1987 the people from foreign country went to the coast, the mountains and the lakes was 40 thousands, 20 thousands and 10 thousands respectively. In 1992, the number of overseas visitors went to the coast slowly decreased to around 35 thousands after it was saw an increase to nearly 80 thousands in the final years. The quantity of people who came to European from a lot of countries to visit the mountains sharply climbed to 30 thousands in 1997 and stay unchanged from 1997 to 2002. This figure experienced a jump to around 36 thousands in 2007. The figure for foreigner visit to the lakes in European was hit the highest point of nearly 75 thousands in the year 2002 after there was a dramatic fall to 50 thousands in 2007.

The line graph illustrate the quantity of foreign visitors to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorebeachbankshorelinecoastlineseaboard
coast
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withridgeelevationpilepeakbluffcliff
mountains
 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpoolpondbasinlagoonreservoir
lakes
 in a European country during 20 years starting from 1987.

Overall
, the general trend for the number of foreigners who visited the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorebeachbankshorelinecoastlineseaboard
coast
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withridgeelevationpilepeakbluffcliff
mountains
 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpoolpondbasinlagoonreservoir
lakes
 was upward over the period shown.

In 1987 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 from foreign country went to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorebeachbankshorelinecoastlineseaboard
coast
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withridgeelevationpilepeakbluffcliff
mountains
 and the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpoolpondbasinlagoonreservoir
lakes
 was 40 thousands, 20 thousands and 10 thousands respectively
. In 1992, the number of overseas visitors went to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withshorebeachbankshorelinecoastlineseaboard
coast
slowly
 decreased to around 35 thousands after it was Consider using a past participle here: "sawed", "sawn", "seen".sawedsawnseen
saw
 an increase to nearly
 80 thousands in the final years. The quantity of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 who came to European from This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 countries to visit the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withridgeelevationpilepeakbluffcliff
mountains
sharply
 climbed to 30 thousands in 1997 and stay unchanged from 1997 to 2002. This figure experienced a jump to around 36 thousands in 2007.

The figure for foreigner visit to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpoolpondbasinlagoonreservoir
lakes
 in European was hit
 the highest point of nearly
 75 thousands in the year 2002 after there was a dramatic fall to 50 thousands in 2007. 