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The line graph compares the number of foreign visitors to types of different places in European country from 1987 to 2007.

The line graph compares the number of foreign visitors to types of different places in European country from 1987 to 2007. bryLX
The line graph illustrate the quantity of foreign visitors to the coast, the mountains and the lakes in a European country during 20 years starting from 1987. Overall, the general trend for the number of foreigners who visited the coast, the mountains and the lakes was upward over the period shown. In 1987 the people from foreign country went to the coast, the mountains and the lakes was 40 thousands, 20 thousands and 10 thousands respectively. In 1992, the number of overseas visitors went to the coast slowly decreased to around 35 thousands after it was saw an increase to nearly 80 thousands in the final years. The quantity of people who came to European from a lot of countries to visit the mountains sharply climbed to 30 thousands in 1997 and stay unchanged from 1997 to 2002. This figure experienced a jump to around 36 thousands in 2007. The figure for foreigner visit to the lakes in European was hit the highest point of nearly 75 thousands in the year 2002 after there was a dramatic fall to 50 thousands in 2007.
The line graph illustrate the quantity of foreign visitors to the
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coast
, the
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mountains
and the
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lakes
in a European country during 20 years starting from 1987.

Overall
, the general trend for the number of foreigners who visited the
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coast
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mountains
and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lakes
was upward over the period shown.

In 1987 the
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people
from foreign country went to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
coast
, the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
mountains
and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
lakes
was 40 thousands, 20 thousands and 10 thousands
respectively
. In 1992, the number of overseas visitors went to the
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coast
slowly
decreased to around 35 thousands after it was
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saw
an increase to
nearly
80 thousands in the final years. The quantity of
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people
who came to European from
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a lot of
countries to visit the
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mountains
sharply
climbed to 30 thousands in 1997 and stay unchanged from 1997 to 2002. This figure experienced a jump to around 36 thousands in 2007.

The figure for foreigner visit to the
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lakes
in European
was hit
the highest point of
nearly
75 thousands in the year 2002 after there was a dramatic fall to 50 thousands in 2007.
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