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The pie charts compare water usage for agriculture, industry and residential in San Diego, California and worldwide.

The pie charts compare water usage for agriculture, industry and residential in San Diego, California and worldwide. d9WWd
The three pie charts illustrate the amount of water consumption for three purposes (residential, industry and agriculture) in San Diego County, California and the rest of the world. Looking at the charts, it is immediately obvious that the percentage of water used for residential is highest in San Diego and California, whereas agriculture consumes/accounts for the majority of water worldwide. In Sand Diego, most water is used for household purposes, occupying 60%, while only 17% of water is consumed by agriculture. By contrast, the amount of water usage for agricultural purposes is highest, with 69%, and least water is used by residential, at solely 8%, in the rest of the world. The proportion of water usage for industry is 23% in both San Diego and worldwide. In terms of California, water is used fairly equally for three purposes. The quantity of water used for residential is highest, accounting for 39%, followed by 33% for industrial purposes. 28% is the amount of water usage for agriculture.
The three pie charts illustrate the amount of
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consumption for three
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purposes
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(residential
, industry and
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agriculture)
in San Diego County, California and the rest of the world.

Looking at the charts, it is immediately obvious that the percentage of
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water
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used
for
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residential
is highest in San Diego and California, whereas
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agriculture
consumes/accounts for the majority of
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worldwide.

In Sand Diego, most
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is
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used
for household
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, occupying 60%, while
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17% of
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water
is consumed
by
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agriculture
. By contrast, the amount of
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usage for agricultural
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purposes
is highest, with 69%, and least
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is
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residential
, at
solely
8%, in the rest of the world. The proportion of
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water
usage for industry is 23% in both San Diego and worldwide.

In terms of California,
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is
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fairly
equally
for three
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purposes
. The quantity of
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for
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residential
is highest, accounting for 39%, followed by 33% for industrial
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purposes
. 28% is the amount of
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usage for
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.
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IELTS academic The pie charts compare water usage for agriculture, industry and residential in San Diego, California and worldwide.

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