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The diagram shows lakeside village now, and how it will look after development.

The diagram shows lakeside village now, and how it will look after development. NyDD0
The given maps portray the current layout of lakeside village and proposals for its redevelopment. Overall, it is vivid (lucid) that numerous modifications are expected to take place, with a number of new urban facilities planned such as cinema, shopping center et cetera. In detail/ in detailed analysis, the river would continue to divide the region in two parts. At present, there is a residential area in the northwest corner and a school in the north side which are set to remain untouched even after renovation. While, the car park is expected to replace the derelict warehouse in the north direction, offices and university will take the place of the old town. Moving towards the west side, there are plans to demolish art center and residential area to pave way for cinema and shopping center respectively. The industrial complex in the southern part of the village, is expected to be expanded by taking the place of (covering the) residential area.
The
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given
maps portray the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
current
layout of lakeside village and proposals for its redevelopment.

Overall
, it is vivid (lucid) that numerous modifications are
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
to take place, with a number of new urban facilities planned such as cinema, shopping center
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et cetera
.

In detail/ in detailed analysis, the river would continue to divide the region in two parts. At present, there is a residential area in the northwest corner and a school in the north side which
are set
to remain untouched even after renovation. While, the car park is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
to replace the derelict warehouse in the north direction, offices and university will take the place of the
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
old
town.

Moving towards the west side, there are plans to demolish art center and residential area to pave way for cinema and shopping center
respectively
. The industrial complex in the southern part of the village, is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
expected
to
be expanded
by taking the place of (covering the) residential area.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows lakeside village now, and how it will look after development.

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4 paragraphs
160 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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