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various social networking platforms visited by the Canadian residents in 2014 and 2015.

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The bar chart compares the percentage of various social networking platforms visited by the Canadian residents in 2014 and 2015. In an overview, internet users showed the tendency to depend on one site than, using multiple sites in the both of the years while, the significant number of population are not at all interested in any social networking services. In 2014, the 22% of internet users did not browse any networking site and it fell down slightly to 21% in 2015. The rate of single site visitors was 36% in 2014 under which the highest counts of people are grouped. Meanwhile, this value declined sharply to 28% from 2014 to 2015. On the other hand, the number of two sites almost remained the same by 23% and 24% in 2014 as well as 2015. In 2014, the Canadians reported using 3 sites, 4 sites and 5 sites were 12%, 5% and 2% and so on. On the contrary, in 2015 there was a gradual rise in the users by 4%, 3% and 2%.
The bar chart compares the percentage of various social networking platforms visited by the Canadian residents in 2014 and 2015.

In an overview, internet users
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the tendency to depend on one
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than, using multiple
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in the both of the years while, the significant number of population are not at all interested in any social networking services.

In 2014, the 22% of internet users did not browse any networking
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and it fell down
slightly
to 21% in 2015. The rate of single
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visitors was 36% in 2014 under which the highest counts of
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are grouped
. Meanwhile, this value declined
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to 28% from 2014 to 2015.
On the other hand
, the number of two
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almost remained the same by 23% and 24% in 2014
as well
as 2015.

In 2014, the Canadians reported using 3
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, 4
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and 5
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were 12%, 5% and 2% and
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, in 2015 there was a gradual rise in the users by 4%, 3% and 2%.
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IELTS academic various social networking platforms visited by the Canadian residents in 2014 and 2015.

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