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The resturant you enjoied going there

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Restaurant tours are one of my and my sister's favorite pastimes. Roboshief, one of the restaurants I recall visiting and enjoying, is located in korush Passage on Sattar Khan Street. The fact that most of the services in this restaurant, such as ordering food and delivering food, were performed by robots was particularly exciting. This restaurant's main menu consists of fast food. The most intriguing aspect was that you could order your food and pick the desired items in your food using the screen on your table. This restaurant's drink menu is very enticing and exciting, and you will undoubtedly find a delicious and favorite drink there. Overall, the lighting, the restaurant's atmosphere, and the food quality were all outstanding. If you live in Tehran, I strongly advise you to dine there at least once.
Restaurant tours are one of my and my sister's favorite pastimes.
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Roboshief
, one of the restaurants I recall visiting and enjoying,
is located
in
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korush
Passage on
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Sattar
Khan Street. The fact that most of the services in this restaurant, such as ordering
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food
and delivering
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food
,
were performed
by robots was
particularly
exciting. This restaurant's main menu consists of
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fast
food.

The most intriguing aspect was that you could order your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
and pick the desired items in your
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
using the screen on your table.

This restaurant's drink menu is
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very
enticing and exciting, and you will
undoubtedly
find a delicious and favorite drink there.

Overall
, the lighting, the restaurant's atmosphere, and the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
food
quality were all outstanding. If you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in Tehran, I
strongly
advise you to dine there at least once.
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IELTS academic The resturant you enjoied going there

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