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Graph showing timbers summary

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The graph illustrates the production of timber over the period from 1989 to 1995. The number of timbers were approximately 50 in 1989. A gradual decline is noted ending up with around 20 timbers by 1995. Overall, there is a moderate decrease in the number of timbers over the six years period. The total number of overseas students was around 20000 students in 2001. This number had a sharp increase until it reached around 81000 enrolled students by 2010. Looking at the commencing enrolled overseas students number, it started off with around 10000 in 2001 and rised steadily until it reached 40000 in 2009 and levelled off through the following year.
The graph illustrates the production of
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timber
over the period from 1989 to 1995. The
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number
of
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timbers
were approximately 50 in 1989. A gradual decline
is noted
ending up with
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around
20
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timbers
by 1995.
Overall
, there is a moderate decrease in the
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number
of
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timbers
over the six years period. The total
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number
of overseas
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students
was
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around
20000
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students
in 2001. This
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number
had a sharp increase until it reached
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around
81000 enrolled
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students
by 2010. Looking at the commencing enrolled overseas
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students
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number
, it
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started
off with
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around
10000 in 2001 and
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rised
steadily
until it reached 40000 in 2009 and levelled off through the following year.
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IELTS academic Graph showing timbers summary

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
111 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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