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The chart gives information about the main phone using reason for young people in one African Country between 2016 and 2019.

The chart gives information about the main phone using reason for young people in one African Country between 2016 and 2019. k6eQM

The chart gives information about the main phone using reason for young people in one African Country between 2016 and 2019. Overall, Social Networks take the biggest share of the pie every 4 years but phone calls the least reason for teenagers from 2016 to 2019. Digital cameras have an increasing trend. However, e-mail has a decreasing trend. Firstly, the social network using increases 6 point end of the period and that have fluctuate trend. E-mail using steadily decrease in the years between and lost 6 percent from 2016to 2019 also its lost second place for user importance. Secondly, the digital camera has increased 5 points end of the period. However, it didn't change between 2016 and 2017. The digital cameras are in the third point 2016 from 2018 but it's move to second position in 2019. The phone calls have fluctuate trend and end of the period it decreases half so using importance reduce 10 percent to 5 percent.

The chart gives information about the main phone using reason for young This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in one African Country between 2016 and 2019.

Overall
, Social Networks take the biggest share of the pie every 4 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 phone calls the least reason for This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :juvenilesadolescents
teenagers
 from 2016 to 2019. Digital cameras have an increasing trend. However
, e-mail has a decreasing trend.

Firstly
, the social network using increases 6 point Possible agreement error. The noun 'end' seems to be countable, so consider using: "ends".ends
end
 of the period and that have Use past participle here: "fluctuated".fluctuated
fluctuate
 trend. E-mail using steadily
 decrease in the years between and lost 6 percent from 2016to 2019 also
 its lost second place for user importance.

Secondly
, the digital camera has increased 5 points This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period. However
, it didn't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 between 2016 and 2017. The digital cameras are in the third point 2016 from 2018 This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 to second position in 2019. The phone calls have Use past participle here: "fluctuated".fluctuated
fluctuate
 trend and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the period it decreases half This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 using importance This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 10 percent to 5 percent. 