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This pie chart demonstrates the number of activities which are done via the Internet in two different groups regarding their ages, that is 18-26 and 60-70 age group. In the young group, the highest percentage goes to social networking and the least one is for booking cinema or travel for instance. In contrast, A large amount of wifi using in the elder group is for making bookings and second to that is for researching information. As it is the obvious, age group of 60-70 only uses 6% of the internet to play games which are about a third of age 18-26. Surprisingly, the youth spend about third times more on social networks that are 24%. In addition, The older group slightly do more purchases and less accessing music or films via the internet. In general, except for the research, booking, and purchases (26%, 29%, and 14% respectively) in all other fields older group spend less time on the internet.

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