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values of mobile sales of five diferengt companies over the years 2009 2011 2013

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The image depicts the information about five cell phones and their purchase patterns all over the world through the years 2009 to 2013. Overall, the highest amongst sales of the mentioned mobiles was bagged by Samsung in the year 2013, whereas the lowest was of apple in the initial years as in 2009. While, Nokia has seen a tremoundous fall as time went by, LG and ZTE have maintained a constant mediocre sale levels over the years. Firstly, in the year 2009, Nokia was at the top of the game with consumers buying taking the value over 400, whereas in the same year apple was at its lowest, which was a mere 25. On the other hand, samsung, LG, ZTE were each at 225, 110, and 50 units respectively. Secondly, the time of 2011 was again topped by Nokia at a level of 420, despite being less than the previous year, it still was on the higher range. Whereas, Samsung and Apple had an increment in their sales to 320 and 90 units respectively. ZTE demonstrated a very low increase to 52, however LG has gone through a fall of a few units and was standing at 90. Finally. in the year 2013, The whole world witnessed an hyperbolic increase in Samsung sales, it was standing at a staggering amount of 450 units whereas the previous chart topper nokia had seen a steep fall to 250. Apple has also managed to raise to a level of 150, while LG AND ZTE were still at the bottom, at a value of 58 and 52 respectively.

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