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The three pie charts illustrate the amount of water used for there diffrent sectors, namely the residential

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The three pie charts illustrate the amount of water used for there diffrent sectors, namely the residential sector, industry and agriculture. Looking for an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that notwithstanding in san dieago and california, water used for households accounts for the highest proportion, agriculture consumes the vast majority of water ussed in the world. In san dieago and california, water usage for households takes up roughy 60% and 39% respectively. The amount of water used for this sector wordwide is only 8%. The opposite trend can be see when look at water consumption in agriculture. This sector comsumes around 69% global water use, whereas the figures for San Diego and California are significantly lower at only 17% and 28%. Turning to the remaining sector, we can see that the water usage for the industrial sector in San Diego the world is the same ( 23%), while the figure for California is slightly higher, at 33%.
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IELTS academic The three pie charts illustrate the amount of water used for there diffrent sectors, namely the residential

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