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Information about the destination of Anthropology graduates

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The pie chart indicate information about the destination of Anthropology graduates from one university, and the table give information about salaries of Anthropology graduates after 5 years’ work. According to the pie chart, we can see that the most graduates were full-time work about 52% followed by part-time work as 15% followed by full-time postgrad study as 8% while 12% of the graduates was unemployed, and 8% of the graduates hadn’t data. According to the table chart, there were 3 types of employment that we can see the most salaries of Anthropology graduates after 5 years’ work as 100000$ was the government sector as 50% followed by freelance consultants as 40% and private companies as 30%, on the other hand the less salaries of graduates about 25000-49999, we can see that private companies as 10% followed by the government sector and freelance consultants as 5%. To sum up, the most graduates were full-time work because it make occasion high salaries related to the table chart.
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indicate information about the destination of Anthropology
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from one university, and the table give information about
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of Anthropology
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after 5 years’ work.

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about 52%
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as 15%
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hadn’t data.

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, there were 3 types of employment that we can
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of Anthropology
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