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using the internet in 3 countries

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The line graph compares what percentage of the people in 3 the countries used the internet between 1999 to 2009. It seems that using the internet in 3 countries including USA, Canada, and Mexico had increased in the whole time frame. In 1999, the proportion of using the internet in Mexico and Canada had been the same rate 10% they were lower from the USA, which was 20% in the USA. The percentage of internet users were in Canada and USA rose, and they had close competition from 19999 to 2009, some times Canada and some times USA overtook each other, the winner of this competition was the USA with 90% and Canada was the second place with 80%. The growth rate of Internet use in Mexico was increased in this decade, Whereas it was weaker than in the other two countries, and Mexico loser this competition with third place by 40%.

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used
 the internet Use "between" + "and" not "to."  Try this: "between 1999 and 2009".between 1999 and 2009
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It seems that using the internet in 3 countries A determiner is probably missing here: "including the USA".including the USA
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, Canada, and Mexico had increased in the whole time frame.

In 1999, the proportion of using the internet in Mexico and Canada had been the same rate 10% they were lower from the USA, which was 20% in the USA.

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 times Canada and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
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 times USA overtook each other, the winner of this competition was the USA with 90% and Canada was the second place with 80%.

The growth rate of Internet This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 in Mexico was increased
 in this decade, Whereas it was weaker than in the other two countries, and Mexico loser this competition with third place by 40%. 