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The plans below show a city in 1950 and the city now

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The map illustrates how a city has been transformed since 1950 and the city now. Overall, the map was not many new facilities have been added. The residential area and business district become far larger. In 1950, a river was in natural shape and size, this figures flowed from the southwest to the southeast. The business district located to the north of the river and the residential area was lied in surrounded the business district. There was two main road crossed at the centre of the business district and became an intersection. The airport was located to the east. Now, At the part of the river was expanded to become a lake. It was harmonize the climatic condition of the city and enhance the scenery of the city. A new main road was constructed in the southwest to the southest. A dam was erected in the southest of the river. There was residential area to enlarged to four directions. An airport remained in the original position but it was expansion in the southest.
The map illustrates how a city has
been transformed
since 1950 and the city
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now
.

Overall
, the map was not
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many
new facilities have been
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added
. The residential area and
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business
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district
become far larger.

In 1950, a
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river
was in natural shape and size, this figures flowed from the southwest to the southeast. The
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business
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district
located to the north of the
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river
and the residential area
was lied
in surrounded the
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business
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district
. There was two main road crossed at the
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centre
of the
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business
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district
and became an intersection. The airport
was located
to the east.

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Now
, At the part of the
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river
was expanded
to become a lake. It was
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harmonize
the climatic condition of the city and enhance the scenery of the city. A new main road
was constructed
in the southwest to the
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southest
. A dam
was erected
in the
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southest
of the
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river
. There was residential area to enlarged to four directions. An airport remained in the original position
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but
it was expansion in the
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southest
.
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IELTS academic The plans below show a city in 1950 and the city now

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4 paragraphs
173 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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