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The chart shows foreign visitor numbers in 3 Vietnamese resorts from 2000 to 2006.

The chart shows foreign visitor numbers in 3 Vietnamese resorts from 2000 to 2006. 5kxgP
The presented bar chart illustrated the amount of overseas traveller in three of Vietnamese attractions namely Phu Quoc, Da Nang and Mui Ne between 200 and 2006. The units are measured in thousands. Overall, Da Nang was the greatest destinations in the first year before 2008. At this point It was the lowest one. Moreover, the number of international sightseers in Da Nang underwent a sharp downward tendency, while, that figure in Mui Ne witneesed a significant upward trend. In 2000, there was 900, 000 foreigners visited Da Nang, which compared to that of Mui Ne was doubled. Additionally, the gulf between the quantity of multi-national vacations in Da Nang and Mui Ne was decreased at 230, 000 in 2002. However the former plummeted to 250, 000 in 2006, while the latter surged and surpassed the former in 2004 with 750, 000 cross-border trippers before reaching 950, 000 ones. It can be seen that the number of global holidaymakers in Phu Quoc was between the figure in Da Nang and Mui Ne. In general, the amount of worldwide travellers visited Da Nang dropped remarkably from 900, 000 in 2000 to 250, 000 in 2006, wheareas that in Mui Ne experienced a noticeable rise of 650, 000 in the given time. More over the number of foreign visitors in Phu Quoc fluctuated slightly around 600, 000 and 550, 000 befored it grew minimally to 620, 000 in 2006.
The presented bar chart illustrated the amount of overseas
traveller
in three of Vietnamese attractions
namely
Phu
Quoc
,
Da
Nang
and
Mui
Ne between 200 and 2006. The units
are measured
in thousands.

Overall
,
Da
Nang
was the greatest destinations in the
first
year
before
2008. At this point It was the lowest one.
Moreover
, the number of international sightseers in
Da
Nang
underwent a sharp downward tendency, while, that figure in
Mui
Ne
witneesed
a significant upward trend.

In 2000, there was 900, 000 foreigners visited
Da
Nang
, which compared to that of
Mui
Ne
was doubled
.
Additionally
, the gulf between the quantity of multi-national vacations in
Da
Nang
and
Mui
Ne
was decreased
at 230, 000 in 2002.
However
the former plummeted to 250, 000 in 2006, while the latter surged and surpassed the former in 2004 with 750, 000 cross-border trippers
before
reaching 950, 000 ones. It can be
seen
that the number of global holidaymakers in
Phu
Quoc
was between the figure in
Da
Nang
and
Mui
Ne.

In general
, the amount of worldwide
travellers
visited
Da
Nang
dropped
remarkably
from 900, 000 in 2000 to 250, 000 in 2006,
wheareas
that in
Mui
Ne experienced a noticeable rise of 650, 000 in the
given
time. More over the number of foreign visitors in
Phu
Quoc
fluctuated
slightly
around 600, 000 and 550, 000
befored
it grew
minimally
to 620, 000 in 2006.
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