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the graph between 1800 to 2100

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The graph show the different between estimates of the past and projections of the future. It is between 1800 to 2100. According to the graph between 1800 to 1870 it approximately contestant -90mm. Also, in 1900 it is almost -100mm. in addition, between 1930 to 1950 it is increased to 30mm. In 1960 it is increased by 50mm, and in 1990 it rise by 100mm. Between 2000 to 2100 it is continue rise dramatically. For example, in 2000 it is almost 120mm, and in 2030 it is approximately 100mm, and in 2050 almost 200mm. In the end of graph 2100 it is 500mm. Finally, according to the graph it is continue rise dramatically.
The
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graph
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show
the
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different
between estimates of the past and projections of the future. It is
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "between 1800 and 2100".
between 1800 to 2100
. According to the
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graph
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between 1800 to 1870
it approximately contestant
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-90mm
.
Also
, in 1900 it is almost
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "-100 mm"
-100mm
.
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in
addition,
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between 1930 to 1950
it
is increased
to
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "30 mm"
30mm
. In
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1960 it
is increased
by
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50mm
, and in 1990 it
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rise
by
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "100 mm"
100mm
.
Use "between" + "and" not "to." Try this: "Between 2000 and 2100".
Between 2000 to 2100
it is
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continue
rise
dramatically
.
For example
, in 2000 it is almost
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "120 mm"
120mm
, and in 2030 it is approximately
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "100 mm"
100mm
, and in 2050 almost
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "200 mm"
200mm
. In the
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end
of
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graph
2100 it is
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500mm
.
Finally
, according to the
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graph
it is
Consider using a past participle here: "continued".
continue
rise
dramatically
.

IELTS academic the graph between 1800 to 2100

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