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The graph illustrates the information of money people spend on five different categories in five different countries in 2002.

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The graph illustrates the information of money people spend on five different categories in five different countries in 2002. It is obvious that the amount of money consumer spending on Food/Drinks and Tobacco is always the hishest in five different countries. In contrast, in five countries, consumers spend smallest amount in Leisure and Education. Consumers in Turkey spend most money on Food/Tobacco and Drinks out of the five countries which is 32, 14%. The money consumers in Spain, Sweden and Italy were nearly the same 15, 77%, 16, 36% and 18, 80% respectively in 2002. the money speding on Clothing and Footwear of Italy was noticeably different with other countries (9% in total) In all five countries, the amount money spending on Leisure and Education was the lowest when comapared with 2 other items. The amount of money Ireland people spend on Tobacco, Food and Drinks is more than ten times of the amount spend on Leisure and Education.
The graph illustrates the information of
money
people
spend
on five
different
categories in five
different
countries
in 2002.

It is obvious that the
amount
of
money
consumer spending on Food/Drinks and Tobacco is always the
hishest
in five
different
countries
.
In contrast
, in five
countries
, consumers
spend
smallest
amount
in Leisure and Education.

Consumers in Turkey
spend
most
money
on Food/Tobacco and Drinks out of the five
countries
which is 32, 14%. The
money
consumers in Spain, Sweden and Italy were
nearly
the same 15, 77%, 16, 36% and 18, 80%
respectively
in 2002.
the
money
speding
on Clothing and Footwear of Italy was
noticeably
different
with other
countries
(9% in total)

In all five
countries
, the
amount
money
spending on Leisure and Education was the lowest when
comapared
with 2 other items. The
amount
of
money
Ireland
people
spend
on Tobacco, Food and Drinks is more than ten times of the
amount
spend
on Leisure and Education.
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IELTS academic The graph illustrates the information of money people spend on five different categories in five different countries in 2002.

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