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usage of water in Six areas

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The chart depicts the percentage of most usage of water in six areas like north america, South America, Europe, Africa, Central Asis, South East Asia. Among these, clearly most area use huge amount of water for agriculture purpose. In North America and Europe they use most of their water in industrial use and more then 30% in agricultural use. However in south America, africa, Central Asia and south East Asia uses huge portion of their water in agriculture in comparison to industrial use and not more than 12% is used for the industrial purpose. In South America, people use the highest percentage of the water for domestic use. Central Asia uses the most of their agriculture, that is 88%, and uses water the lowest in industrial use among these six areas. And the Europe utilize the most in Industrial usage. In summary, Northamerica and Europe utilizes the most water in industrial production and central asia nd south East Asia, is the lowest to use the water for domestic and industrial use.
The chart depicts the percentage of most usage of
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water
in six areas like
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north america
, South America, Europe, Africa,
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Central
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Asis
, South East Asia. Among these,
clearly
most area
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use
huge amount of
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water
for agriculture purpose.

In North America and Europe they
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use
most of their
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water
in
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industrial
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use
and more
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then
30% in agricultural
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use
.
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However
in
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south America
,
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africa
,
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Central
Asia and south East Asia
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uses
huge portion of their
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water
in agriculture
in comparison
to
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industrial
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use
and not more than 12% is
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used
for the
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industrial
purpose. In South America,
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people
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use
the highest percentage of the
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water
for domestic
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use
.
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Central
Asia
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uses
the most of their agriculture,
that is
88%, and
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uses
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water
the lowest in
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industrial
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use
among these six areas. And the Europe utilize the most in
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Industrial
usage.

In summary,
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Northamerica
and Europe utilizes the most
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water
in
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industrial
production and
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central asia
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nd
south East Asia, is the lowest to
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the
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for domestic and
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industrial
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use
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IELTS academic usage of water in Six areas

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
171 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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