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The given chart illustrates the average carbon dioxide emissions per person of four different countries in 1967 and 2007.

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The given chart illustrates the average carbon dioxide emissions per person of four different countries in 1967 and 2007. Overall, Carbon dioxide emissions in metric tonnes of the United Kingdom and Sweden gradually went down during the 40 years period. While metric tonnes percentages of Italy and Portugal went up in chart. Despite steady decrease from 11 to 9 rate, emissions in the UK remained higher than in the other three countries over these 40 years. Sweden's emissions suddenly rose to 10. 5 in 1977 but since that descended roughly 5 metric tonnes in 2007. The rate is one of the smallest emitters of four countries that year. Percentage of average carbon emission steadily climbed in Italy. The first emission in metric tonnes started to 4 ratio from 1967, and finally reached almost 8 ratio from 2007. The smallest average ratio is Portugal. This country's average of emissions showed around 1. 5 metric tonnes in 1967. then the record consistently grew and reached a similar level to sweden's by 2007, at about 5 metric tonnes
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carbon dioxide
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emissions
per person of four
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different
countries in 1967 and 2007.

Overall
, Carbon dioxide
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emissions
in metric tonnes of the United Kingdom and Sweden
gradually
went down during the 40 years period. While metric tonnes percentages of Italy and Portugal went up in chart. Despite steady decrease from 11 to 9 rate,
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emissions
in the UK remained higher than in the other three countries over these 40 years. Sweden's
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suddenly
rose to 10. 5 in 1977
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since that descended roughly 5 metric tonnes in 2007. The rate is one of the smallest emitters of four countries that year.

Percentage of
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carbon
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steadily
climbed in Italy. The
first
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emission
in metric tonnes
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started
to 4
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ratio
from 1967, and
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reached almost 8
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ratio
from 2007. The smallest
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ratio is Portugal. This country's
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of
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emissions
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showed
around 1. 5 metric tonnes in 1967.
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then
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consistently
grew and reached a similar level to
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sweden
's by 2007, at about 5 metric
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IELTS academic The given chart illustrates the average carbon dioxide emissions per person of four different countries in 1967 and 2007.

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