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Write a description, making a recommendation of the most suitable location.

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The diagram visualizes where It will built the new sports stadium in city of WestGate. There are three possibile locations available, everyone with all its different features and disadvantages. Location B has the smallest area, and it used to be an old Fire Station. Though it is provided of two spaces dedicated to parking, it is quite far from public transports. The second one, A, is affected to the same issue: bus stop and train station are not in the nearby. In add to that, it has just a small car park and two big blocks of Housing surround it. A good point is the size, very large, and the actual use, in fact it is already a sports and leisure time park. The latter, C, was un industrial land with a lot of car parks available. It very to reach it in many ways: bus stop is just in front of it and train station is not to far. All in all the C area seems to be the high points in order to become the new sports stadium location. It should be considered the costs of conversion of every single area but that piece of information is not given.
The diagram visualizes where It will
built
the new sports stadium in city of
WestGate
.

There are three
possibile
locations available, everyone with all its
different
features and disadvantages.

Location B has the smallest area, and it
used
to be an
old
Fire Station.

Though it
is provided
of two spaces dedicated to parking, it is quite far from public transports.

The second one, A, is
affected
to the same issue:

bus
stop
and train station are not in the nearby.

In
add
to that, it has
just
a
small
car park and two
big
blocks of Housing surround it.

A
good
point is the size,
very
large, and the actual
use
, in fact it is already a sports and leisure time park.

The latter, C, was
un
industrial land with
a lot of
car parks available.

It
very
to reach it in
many
ways: bus
stop
is
just
in front of it and train station is not
to
far.

All in all the C area seems to be the high points in order to become the new sports stadium location.

It should
be considered
the costs of conversion of every single area
but
that piece of information is not
given
.
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IELTS academic Write a description, making a recommendation of the most suitable location.

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  American English
12 paragraphs
201 words
5.5
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