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The diagrams shows the concrete making process and how cement is used to make concrete

The diagrams shows the concrete making process and how cement is used to make concrete B7KDp

The two diagrams illustrate the procedure of producing cement and concrete. Overall, it is clear that in order to make concrete cement should be produced and pass few stages. The process involves limestone and clay that then are crushed to a powder by metal roller. In the second stage there is a mixer structure which consists of a rotating heater, a pipe and a heater. The substance that is verified by hot temperature exposes to grinding. The final powder is cement which is put in the bags. The second diagram shows the way concrete is made out of mixture which formula is 15 % of cement, 10% of water, 50% of gravel and 25% of sand. Concrete mainly composed of small stones, which is called gravel. The main step of concrete manufacturing requires mixer device that is rotating clockwise and this knead concrete to a final state. In conclusion, we can see that data from the diagrams indicates that there are different stages and equipment in cement and concrete-making process.

The two diagrams illustrate the procedure of producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 and concrete.

Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 concrete You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 should be produced
 and pass few stages.

The process involves limestone and clay that then are crushed
 to a powder by metal roller. In the second stage there is a mixer structure which consists of a rotating heater, a pipe and a heater. The substance that is verified
 by hot temperature exposes to grinding. The final powder is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 which is put
 in the bags.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 second diagram This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 the way concrete is made
 out of mixture which formula is 15 % of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
, 10% of water, 50% of gravel and 25% of sand. Concrete mainly
 composed of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 stones, which is called
 gravel. The main step of concrete manufacturing requires mixer device that is
 rotating clockwise and The verb 'knead' is plural. Did you mean: "this kneads"? Did you use a verb instead of a noun?this kneads
this knead
 concrete to a final state.

In conclusion
, we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 that data from the diagrams indicates that there are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 stages and equipment in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
 and concrete-making process. 