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Below show the layout of University sports and now and how it will appear after redevelopment

Below show the layout of University sports and now and how it will appear after redevelopment qaMow

The given diagram chart illustrates the information about the architectural appearance of the university support centre along with the prediction those likely to appear in the future after re-development As regards, it can be clearly seen that the area of gym is going to be expand horizontally, as far as, the area that was used to be outdoor courts in the north-east direction is likely to acquire by the sports hall along with two dance studios beyond this hall, in addition, the possibility to develop changing room in the corner of each south direction similarly the cafe on the right hand side of the north-east As the west University sports and is concerned, it is estimated to construct laser pole by replacing outdoor quotes of West direction after that all the remaining sports wood be on their same place such as full in the centre of the sports ground same as pool reception and changing room would be acquired at same place after re-development of the university sports centre Overall there is a high likelihood of and waiting different places to new departments such as transformation of outdoor courts to sports hall and leisure pool

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 diagram chart illustrates the information about the architectural appearance of the university support Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 along with the prediction those likely to appear in the future after re-development

As regards, it can be clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that the area of gym is going to be Consider using a past participle here: "expanded".expanded
expand
horizontally
, as far as, the area that was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be outdoor courts in the north-east direction is likely to acquire by the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 hall along with two dance studios beyond this hall, in addition
, the possibility to develop changing room in the corner of each south direction similarly
 the 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
 on the Did you mean the adjective "right-hand"?right-hand
right hand
 side of the north-east

As the west University You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 and is concerned
, it is estimated
 to construct laser pole by replacing outdoor quotes of West direction after that all the remaining You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
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centre
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 ground same as pool reception and changing room would be acquired
 at same place after re-development of the university You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
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centre


Overall
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different
 places to new departments such as transformation of outdoor courts to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sports
 hall and leisure pool