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University education may equal for males and female

University education may equal for males and female PkGG2

University education may play Crusial stage for all students to move towards with their Study. When accepting equal number of gender in every Subject may hold pessimistic view. owing to Various social and personal Consideration, I strongly hold pessimistic view on this move. Major propotion of male student thoroughly bound with heavy subjects. Such as science, Maths and technology, so these days some students are Struggling with their poverty, starvation, marginalization, Isolation, Social discrimination of the rich and poor gap. Therefore welcoming an equal number of male and female students in every Subiects may eliminate their chance to enrol on University education. for instance, most of the male students are interesting to learn heavy Subjects like Maths and science; when enrolling the Same number of males and females in every subject may mitigate male engagement with those subjects. So, Both males and females have different choices.

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