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unemployed people in tow countries United States and Japan from 1993 to 1999

unemployed people in tow countries United States and Japan from 1993 to 1999 N3Kpb

This line graph depicts the ratio of unemployed people in tow countries United States and Japan from 1993 to 1999. It is clear from the graph that, there was a contradiction in the rates between the tow nations. According to What is Show. In United States the rate Start From 7. 5 in 1993 March than Significantly decreased to 5. 5 in 1995 March. Then it stayed at the same level for about a year then drop significantly under to 4. 5. While the figure in Japan begin from 2. 0 in the Similar period and then gradually rose to 3. 5 in 1 996 march. After that it stay steady for one year then it reached the highest level in 1999. To Sum up, we could say that, meanwhile the percentage of the workforce in Japan and USA were very different but in 1999 March both of them had approximately the same number of unemployed.

This line graph depicts the ratio of unemployed This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in tow countries United States and Japan from 1993 to 1999. It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 from the graph that, there was a contradiction in the rates between the tow nations.

According to What is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
Show
. A determiner is probably missing here: "In the United States".In the United States
In United States
 the rate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
Start
 From 7. 5 in 1993 March than Significantly
 decreased to 5. 5 in 1995 March. Then it stayed at the same level for about a year then drop significantly
 under to 4. 5.

“While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 the figure in Japan This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 from 2. 0 in the Similar period and then gradually
 rose to 3. 5 in 1 996 march. After that it stay steady for one year then it reached the highest level in 1999.

To Sum up, we could say that, meanwhile the percentage of the workforce in Japan and USA were This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in 1999 March both of them had approximately the same number of unemployed. 