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unemployment rate in USA and japan

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The line graph provide the information about the percentage of people unemployed in America and Japan in march-1993 to march-1999. To begin with, There was linear increase in the number of unemployment. In the year 1993, almost 2. 5% of workers are out of employment which rosed to 4% in the next year. From march-1995, there was gradual incline in unemployment. It was 4 % in 1996 that increased to 5. 5% in 1998; However, rate again fell down to 5%. However, in America, employment ratio kept on increasing. In 1993, people not in work force are 7% that declined to 5% in two years(1995). Moreover, unemployment rate kept on fluctuating between 1997 and 1999 but always remain between 4. 5% to 5. 5% respectively. Overall, it is eventually concluded that USA shows that number of people in the work force is increasing whereas Japan unemployment rate kept on increasing at alower rate.

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